Here I have experimented with techniques, I have made it more minimal as before my teachers thought it looked to cluttered which I agreed with, they also thought my model looked too young, therefore I will do more shots using an older model. I think the strapline looks better at the bottom of the page as when it's at the top it draws attention away from the masthead. I think the masthead need's a thinner font as at the moment it is slightly too thick. I like the handwritten font and how it has been reduced to 2 lines.
Here I have experimented with techniques, I have made it more minimal as before my teachers thought it looked to cluttered which I agreed with, they also thought my model looked too young, therefore I will do more shots using an older model. I think the strapline looks better at the bottom of the page as when it's at the top it draws attention away from the masthead. I think the masthead need's a thinner font as at the moment it is slightly too thick. I like the handwritten font and how it has been reduced to 2 lines.
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Lily, This is so good! However, I think that you looked better on the front cover, because you look a lot older than your sister, therefore you apply more to your age range/ audience. HEHE xxx
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